Crit Post

Feb. 16th, 2019 08:32 pm
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Critique, help and suggestions for the character of Elena from Final Fantasy VII go here. If you think I'm going about things the wrong way or if there's things I need to work on, or even if I plain old suck, feel free to let me know at any time.

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blonde_neophyte: (dark)
[Heavy panting]

Urgh...

Found a bunch of monsters by the fountain. Don't worry - they're dead. I made sure of that. I just...

A weak laugh, then a pained groan.

I think...I think I may have overestimated my strength.

There's the sound of a thick liquid dripping on the floor.

Don't...hah...don't bother to lecture me, Sir. You either, Reno. I learned my lesson. I'm very sorry and I won't do that again.

I'll be fine. It's just a flesh wound, honest. A sterile dressing, a bottle of bourbon and a crash out on the couch and I'll be as good as new.

I don't...I don't suppose anyone had a medkit I could borrow?

Ninth

Sep. 29th, 2009 05:05 pm
blonde_neophyte: (bitch please)
All right.

Gunshots. At the carnival.

What happened? I need to know, because we can't just have random chaos and people shooting each other all over the place.

I know we can't technically die here but there's always enough danger with all the ghosts and monsters as it is. We don't need to add to it by killing each other.
blonde_neophyte: (stick 'em up)
[Footsteps.]

[mumbling] Brr. Why's it so friggen cold?

[Sudden pause.]



...Hey. What's this? How'd that get here all of a sudden?

--Wha-?!

SON OF A BITCH!

[Heavy gunshots, glass shattering everywhere, then the dry click of an empty magazine clip.]

[Everything is silent except for her heavy breathing.]


Damnit!
blonde_neophyte: (bitch please)
Can somebody please explain to me what going on? Because last time I checked, people who die don't just "come back" like nothing has happened. Especially not when they're impaled with bits of furniture. Trust me, I've studied this subject.

They're not zombies, are they?

Don't laugh! We get monsters and magic regenerating buildings every other week. Zombies are probably the next step.

Locked to Reno )

Familiar

Apr. 14th, 2009 01:30 am
blonde_neophyte: (Default)
Elena's familiar is a fennec fox she named Minerva.

images )
blonde_neophyte: (stick 'em up)
[[Elena is panting heavily as she tries to catch her breath.]]

Tseng! I saw it! I saw the thing... [gasp...pant]... the thing you saw in your vision! It looked like one of Hojo's experiments, with multiple bodies fused together just like you said!

[gasp...wheeze]

Bullets don't work. At least not this calibre. And it's really hard to sneak up on. I tried to follow it but it found me straight away. I think it could smell me.

Can..can we... Is there anyway to make sure it can't smell us?




[[ooc; Turks and Rufus - feel free to yell at her if this was meant to be filtered.]]
blonde_neophyte: (bitch please)
I would very much like to have my brain space back to myself now, please...

Seriously, no more visions. Last night I shot at a raccoon on a garbage can thinking it was something else. Stupid shiny eyes... Sorry if I woke anyone up.

Locked Message to Tseng: Visible by Turks and Rufus )



ooc; Do they have raccoons and garbage cans in Nuadoria? *sweatdrop*
blonde_neophyte: (Default)
[[The time is early dawn, when most people would still be asleep, yet Elena is up and awake.]]

Um, hello? I can't sleep. Any insomniacs out there feel like a chat?

...

Uh, okay, that sounded a bit silly. It's just that I had....well it wasn't really a dream, I think. I'm not some kid that gets scared after having harmless nightmares. It was -- I don't know -- post-traumatic stress disorder from Meteorfall, perhaps? I'm not going crazy though. I just....

...I just can't get the images out of my head. Just standing there, watching the world end, knowing you're the only person left...

...Being all alone.

A long silence.

Y'know, this place is actually kind of creepy at this time in the morning. When everyone's asleep it seems like there are no other humans around. At least the birds will start singing soon, so I know the world will still be here when the sun rises. There are birds here, right? I never really paid much attention before.

Elena gives a heavy sigh.

Well, if I can't sleep, I might as well do some work.

(Locked text message to Tseng, visible to Rufus and Turks) )
blonde_neophyte: (squee!)
Now all the drama's over I think I owe some people a poker game.

Locked to Erielle )
blonde_neophyte: (oh no)
Just what on the planet was that thing?

Locked to the Turks and Rufus )

Does this city have an army? A police force? Anything?
blonde_neophyte: (rush)
[[Weak coughing, then muttered cursing.]]

Son of a-! That hurt, damn it!

[[Deep breath.]]

Okay...okay...Elena of the Turks here, reporting a possible post-Meteor magnetic storm. I thought those stupid things were over already. Requesting backup and medical assistance at co-ordinates...uh...you can just ping my phone, right?

[[Sound of phone opening, then clicking shut.]]

Uhn, on second thoughts, forget that. My phone's broken. But it wasn't my fault this time! So can somebody please triangulate my position? Please?

...

Reno? Rude?

Anybody?

App

Jan. 12th, 2009 08:01 pm
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Character: Elena
Series: Final Fantasy VII
Timeline: One month after Meteorfall
Wiki Us a Bio/History:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Characters_of_Final_Fantasy_VII#Elena
http://final-heaven.org/elena/basic.php

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